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Devry University
Sep-2004 - Aug-2010
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NatSteel Holdings Pte Ltd
Aug-2007 - Jul-2017
I need help fixing and improving my final paper.
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4/6/17 2:14 PM You have the makings of a good paper, but need to better state what you plan to discuss- in other words, what topic do you plan to discuss and point you want to argue? Watch wording, you do not want to leave your ideas unclear. My suggestion is to narrow your focus to discussing a specific topic, as mentioned in the rubric, like euthanasia, then can take a position and argue for it using the theories we have discussed. This could allow you to use religious ethics.Â
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Submit the final draft of your paper with all corrections and changes made. For additional details, please refer to the Final Project Document in the Assignment Guidelines and Rubrics section of the course.
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