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Phoniex
Jul-2007 - Jun-2012
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ChevronTexaco Corporation
Feb-2009 - Nov-2016
 I think that your discussion is good but I would add more references and citations to back everything up.  Especially if you are quoting statistics.  The first paragraph looks good with a citation at the end but I think that you need another citation at the end of the second paragraph.  I'm not sure if the citation that you have in the second sentence of the second paragraph applies to the whole paragraph.  The second sentence seems incomplete to me I think that you should rephrase it to being "An article titled, "The U.S. Has the Highest Corporate Income Tax Rate in the OECD", by Kyle Pomerleau (2014) listed corporate tax at 39.1%."  By combining those two sentences seems to make more sense.
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