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Category > English Posted 22 Nov 2017 My Price 10.00

hiking from southwestern to northeastern

Could you help me correct my Right, Reason from Wrong sentence please?

 

 

1.    Wrong: During studying, she had inspired to explore her homeland by herself.

 

Right: While studying, she was inspired to explore her homeland by herself.

 

Reason: A)  word choice and past participle.

 

             B) had is past perfect tense, was is passive voice.

 

2.    Wrong: In May 2010, she started hiking from southwestern to northeastern of

 

            South Korea.

 

Right: In May 2010, she started hiking from southwestern to northeastern

 

            South Korea.

 

Reason: northeastern is adj, South Korea is noun, adj + N, (not need pref: of)

 

3.    Wrong: During the 35 days traveling, she had many obstructions that she felt to

 

            give up the trip.

 

           Right: While traveling for 35 days, she had many difficulties that made her want

 

                      to give up.

 

Reason: A) word choice and past participle.

 

                        B) word choice à obstructions mean something that blocks with an

 

                              obstacle or an act of obstructing, difficulties mean                    

 

                              a trouble or struggle.

 

                        C) sentence structure à adj clause.

 

           4) Wrong: When she came back, she obviously saw the civilization life in town.

 

               Right: When she came back, she obviously saw the civilized life in town.

 

    Reason: word form à civilization is a noun, civilized is adj.

 

5) Wrong: She realized that she grew up in both modern and original country.

 

    Right: She realized that she had grown up in the modern and old-fashioned

 

   country.

 

                Reason: A) past perfect, B) articles, C) word choice

 

            6) Wrong: I agree with the writer that you will learn culture through people

 

       lifestyle by yourself.

 

                  Right:  I agree with the writer that people will learn culture through other

 

                  lifestyles by themselves.

 

       Reason: not use the third person in opinion.

 

   7) Wrong: For example, once time when I visited a rural ___ in Thailand.

 

        Right: For example, one time when I visited a rural area in Thailand.

 

        Reason: A) once is adv, one is adj, adj + N

 

                     B) rural + area, adj + N

 

     8) Wrong: People in __village had to get up early in the morning to cook

 

food and then the villagers brought ___ to the temple for offering

 

to the monks.

 

          Right: People in the village had to get up early in the morning to cook

 

food and then the villagers brought the breakfast to the temple for

 

offering to the monks.

 

                    Reason: A) articles, B) need obj.

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Status NEW Posted 22 Nov 2017 01:11 PM My Price 10.00

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