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Strayer,Phoniex,University of California
Feb-1999 - Mar-2006
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Review Test 2
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Make the changes needed to correct the misplaced modifier in each sentence.
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1.    Henry Wadsworth Longfellow was born a poet and professor in 1907 in Portland, Maine.
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Corrected:
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow was born a poet and professor in 1907 in Portland, Maine.
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2.    One of Longfellow's most famous poems during the Revolutionary War is "Paul Revere's Ride," depicting an historically important night.
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Corrected:
One of Longfellow's most famous poems during the Revolutionary War is "Paul Revere's Ride," depicting an historically important night.
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3.    Longfellow wrote that rainbows are flowers that have died and gone to heaven in a poem.
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Corrected:
Longfellow wrote that rainbows are flowers that have died and gone to heaven in a poem.
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4.    Longfellow's wife, Frannie, died when her dress caught fire from terrible burns.
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Corrected:
Longfellow's wife, Frannie, died when her dress caught fire from terrible burns.
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5.    Eighteen years later, in the sonnet, "The Cross of Snow," Longfellow never fully recovered and commemorated his wife's death.
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Corrected:
Eighteen years later, in the sonnet, "The Cross of Snow," Longfellow never fully recovered and commemorated his wife's death.
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Chapter 33 - Complete Review Tests 1, 2, and 3 on pages 520 and 521.
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Review Test 1
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Write DM for dangling modifier or C for correct in the space provided for each sentence.
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1. Having considered several models, the Ford mustang was finally agreed upon.
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2. Having considered several models, we finally agreed upon the Ford Mustang.
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3. After eating shellfish for the first time, Jim had a frightening allergic reaction.
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4. After eating shellfish for the first time, Jim's allergic reaction was frightening.
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5. At sixteen, my parents bought me a car.
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6. When I was sixteen, my parents bought me a car.
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7. Waddling slowly along the path, the overweight cat made the girls laugh.
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8. Waddling slowly along the path, the young girls laughed at the overweight cat.
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9. Large and impressive, I was amazed by the size of the tree.
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10. Large and impressive, the tree amazed me by its size.
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