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Indus Valley Civilization visual sources show that our ancestor has knowledge and skills about mathematics and architecture. They build their homes and other structures from handmade tools and the sources show that they have mentally and physically understanding of the world. For example, town building and housing that sometimes were used for food storage. Indus Valley Civilization are artifacts that tells people about their village and their people and what there were doing to survive and to entrain themselves. The author responds, "administration, we know very little about the way Indus dwellers governed themselves or structured their society. We also know little about their economy except that village life focused on agriculture and cattle herding and life in the larger cities centered on the production of arts and crafts (p.18, para1)."  In particular, a "Unicorn Steal" figures artifacts and other ones represent that were traders and business people, artifacts can be imaginary or realistic. According to the reading, "many of the animals are easily recognizable: buffaloes, elephants, rhinoceroses, bulls, tigers, and antelopes (p. 21, para. 2)" and "to begin, we may reasonably conclude that the images express an intense fascination with, and perhaps anxiety about, sexuality and reproductive functions (p.22, para 1)". The images from an artifact figures were a buffalo, a crocodile, an elephant, a unicorn or a bull every animal is considered to be a male.  Pottery, as the "Man from Mohenjo Daro" is a symbol that there are cities of civilization (Mohenjo Darro and Haprappa). On my opinion Artifact / visual sources explains the history of our ancestors and tell us how their appearance appointed by figures, drawing or other antichretic. Their clothing, cultural, hairdos, and beautifications on females such as, jewelry, class, culture, and differences among each other. Having hypothesis (belief or practice) to demonstrates something exist is a way of showing understanding of the context but is not a confirmation to the theory meaning we only know what we think we know from researcher but we don't know the side of the Indus Valley Civilization and the way of thinking. Our society has multicultural that is important to the people and is a great idea to develop, apply, and explore new ways to our world to advance. In the reading the author states the differences between other culture as Judaism, Shinto, Zoroastrianism, Islam, and Hinduism and having the difference of cultures shows to other states that we accept changes and we have no fear to try new things. Evidence of artifacts or other sources helps the researchers to know how our ancestors culture contribute to and observe through generation how culture has change and what we can do to survives as they did without high advance technology. The reading confirmed, "sketch of life in the ancient Indus Valley, let us sum up the conclusions that seem best supported by the evidence currently available. Harappan culture was deeply concerned with procreation and purity (p.26, para 2)." Culture influence people and helps to think differently.

However, on the reading, "The Jain-Tradition" explains the role of non-violence on the environment and express themselves spiritual and a way of seeing peace. The Jain tradition has been spreading since the establish date and has influence the community and was found by Mahavira. Evidently, "The Jain tradition has flourished continuously in the India subcontinent since the sixth century BC, unlike the Buddhist tradition, which was faded in India (p.2, para 2)." On the section, "The Mahavira" known as Vardhamāna and the Royal of the palace (king) was surround with "silver, gold, diamond, clothes, ornaments, leaves, flowers,....sandal powder, and riches (p.6,para3).  Mahavira has a different tradition from Jain, as reported by Mahavira events are, "renunciation, enlightenment, and final release from life where Jain events are portrayed in arts and architecture, in rituals at the temple and at the home, in festivals, and in the performing art (p.6, para, 4)." The five events(practices) are important to make in ceremony or ritual to make an image are the importance to a temple or altars.  The five events represent non-violence, truthfulness, not stealing, chastity, non-attachment, continues process of death and re-incarnation, wanderers, so they don't become attached and a virtuous woman. Non-violence is incurred to everyone and anything, animals contributed to the category of no harm of any kind. Mentioned by the author, "the taking of animal life is prohibited, and one must destroy plant life for food as strongly as possible (p.20, para. 4)." One example given by the author, most of monk eat only one meal per day and some are vegetarians. In the story, the author shows the difference between Jain nuns and monks, nuns have more rules than monks (both do not war shoes, have few belongings as begging bowl, broom, religious book, and clothes and other materials). In the beginning of the Karma is a topic talk by the author mentioning Karma is "material force" and karma is a concept of body language, speech, mind, imagination and knowledge. How I see karma is if someone does something harmful to other person something evil will return to the person someday but the action can be positive or negative, all depend on the situation. Whereas, dharma is more connect to religious and moral stating if you do good on your action on return you will "good wife" or "following a good diet". Both traditions from Indus Valley Civilization and Jain Tradition has different way of viewing their culture and how everyone think their culture is the best acquires from each one. Most impact, evidence of artifacts or other sources helps the researchers to know how our ancestors culture contribute to and observe through generation how culture has change and what we can do to survives as they did without high advance technology. Having multicultural is a way of making and presenting to others that we respect other views and we are unique we bring new ideas to the table. New culture or tradition can influence to create relationships with others and have knowledge of others culture and not be so ignorance of what is occurring around us and learn how to talk with other people from different background, is grating knowing and experience maybe applied the ideas and learn from them to be a great person. People nowadays are not to accepted and criticize everything.