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An assignment redo---- Got help before and ended poorly- I received a D
Teacher's notes---- first help received 89% similarity score
Unit 1 - Individual Project
Content: Addresses each prompt, demonstrates an understanding of the subject, and shows critical thinking skills (90 points possible):55
Technical: Has good APA format and was presented in essay format (5 points possible):1
Technical: Grammar is at college level and paper is free of errors relating to sentence structure, capitalization, and spelling (5 points possible):5
XXXXX, thank you for your submission. I think you have a good start here, but I want you to work on a few things in the future. First, please work on the in text citations. A citation is comprised of the original author’s last name and the year of publication for the article you are referencing. There are many sentences that need citing, and make sure you are using the appropriate citations for quotes when you quote. If you use information form a source, you must give credit to that source. If you make an assertion of opinion or fact then you have to support that opinion or fact with information from an academic source.
Next, please work on the APA formatting. Make sure you are using the appropriate title page and headers. You want you use Times New Roman font in the header, the title page, and the rest of the body. The words, “Running Head” should appear on the title page in the header just before the title. All subsequent pages must only contain the title.
Lastly, please work on the quoting and paraphrasing. You have a fairly high similarity rating here, which means that much of your paper is taken word for word from your sources. Please put these passages in your own words and give credit to the original source. Read the information, process it, then rewrite it in your own words with the source put away.
Let me know if you have any questions.
Type:
Individual Project
Unit:
The Criminal Justice System
Due Date:
Sun, 6/12/16
Grading Type:
Numeric
Points Possible:
100
Points Earned:
61
Deliverable Length:
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Please note that you are required to support your views by citing your sources in all assignments. Even if the question asks for your opinion, you are still expected to support your opinion with references to published works and other materials. APA format is necessary for your assignments when citing references, and assistance on how to do so is available using the APA Citation Center. Complete the following to learn more on APA format:
For more information on citing your sources, please click on the "About this Course" link in the classroom.
Ms. Singh is a client of your firm. She was recently arrested for breach of peace during an altercation at a bar. Ms. Singh was the recipient of unwanted advances from another patron at the bar. Her boyfriend became jealous and punched the other man. Ms. Singh was arrested for breach of peace. She is very concerned about the possibility of a long prison sentence and capital punishment. Breach of peace is a misdemeanor.
The criminal attorney you work for asked you to complete the following:
I attached the first turn in..... If you want to start over or clean up or paraphrase the language.
Attachments:
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