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Category > English Posted 30 May 2017 My Price 15.00

Vary sentence length

As you know, business people are busy. Often, our job is to write messages that are highly readable and accessible, so that our readers can understand our messages as quickly and easily as possible.

In this exercise, you will work to edit a piece of writing to make it easier for fast reading. Your challenge: Reduce this message by at least 50% while still conveying the meaning.

It will help to:

  • Vary sentence length
  • Keep paragraphs short (125 words or fewer)
  • Focus on one concept per paragraph
  • Place key ideas at the beginning
  • Use lists, headings and subheadings for fast reading.
  • Eliminate redundant words and phrases

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Status NEW Posted 30 May 2017 03:05 AM My Price 15.00

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