Surprising Reversal Pattern
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Surprising Reversal Pattern (20%) - Essay uses the surprising reversal pattern
This essay exemplifies the surprising reversal pattern in writing.
20Â /Â 20.0Â pts
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Common View (30%) - Essay clearly explains the common view or expected answer to the question
The common views you present are more historical than social, which is the premise of your thesis statement decrying people's interaction with cellphones. You're close, but not quite there.
20Â /Â 30.0Â pts
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Reversal (30%) - Essay supports the reversal with interesting and adequate details
The essay provides adequate descriptions to support the reversal. However, as currently written, without transitional phrases and references, audiences are lost on what to focus. The headings don't help; readers should never depend on headings to guide them in reading the text.
20Â /Â 30.0Â pts
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Grammar, Punctuation, Organization, Word Range (20%) - Writing is well organized and free of grammar and punctuation errors; assignment is within the word range; if outside sources are used, an attempt is made to give credit (not necessary to be in APA style for this assignment)
When revising this essay, check on comma splices. Also, try paring down the number of words in sentences; get to the essence of what you're trying to say.
15Â /Â 20.0Â pts
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