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MCS,MBA(IT), Pursuing PHD
Devry University
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NatSteel Holdings Pte Ltd
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Question description
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Upload the first draft of your short story. You will have the opportunity to resubmit your story after receiving feedback in order to have it re-evaluated and re-graded.
Story Writing: Rough Draft # 1
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CATEGORY |
1 = emergent |
2 = evident |
3 = skilled |
4 = advanced |
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Problem/Conflict |
It is not clear what problem the main characters face. |
It is fairly easy for the reader to understand the problem the main characters face but it is not clear why it is a problem. |
It is fairly easy for the reader to understand the problem the main characters face and why it is a problem. |
It is very easy for the reader to understand the problem the main characters face and why it is a problem. |
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Characters |
It is hard to tell who the main characters are. |
The main characters are named and described. |
Most readers would have some idea of what the characters looked like. |
The main characters are named and clearly described in text as well as pictures. Most readers could describe the characters accurately. |
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Setting |
The reader has trouble figuring out when and where the story took place. |
The reader can figure out when and where the story took place, but the author didn't supply much detail. |
Some vivid, descriptive words are used to tell the audience when and where the story took place. |
Many vivid, descriptive words are used to tell when and where the story took place. |
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Solution/Resolution |
No solution is attempted or it is impossible to understand. |
The solution to the character's problem is a little hard to understand. |
The solution to the character's problem is easy to understand, and is somewhat logical. |
The solution to the character's problem is easy to understand, and is logical. There are no loose ends. |
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Focus on Assigned Topic |
No attempt has been made to relate the story to the assigned topic. |
Some of the story is related to the assigned topic, but a reader does not learn much about the topic. |
Most of the story is related to the assigned topic. The story wanders off at one point, but the reader can still learn something about the topic. |
The entire story is related to the assigned topic and allows the reader to understand much more about the topic. |
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