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Today isFriday, I have nothing to do in the afternoon, I decided to challenge my self to 4 hours without playing the phone. At first, I thought I had no way to stick with it for so long. So I decided to put the phone at home. I drove to a coffee shop and bought a cup of coffee. I wanted to sit and pass the time, but I found no mobile phone and computer time is too slow. Everyone is playing the phone and computer, I sat there feeling sucker, so I left.

Back to the car, I began to hesitate where to go. I want to give my friend a phone call, suddenly found that I did not take the phone. Well, I only have to find something to do. I drove to the shopping mall. I turn inside shopping mall in a circle, along the shops next to the city park to go, I suddenly realized that I has never been in this road through. Each time driving, did not notice the surrounding buildings and landscapes. I walked and drink coffee, there are some of people running and walking with the dog.I always feel Manhattan is so boring, and now I think the reason why I did not feel the really life. In the absence of mobile phone time, I can slow down my rhythm. I found that our rhythm is always fast when we use the cell phone. We always look at the phone, we are always spy on others by using cell phone, but also by others spy. Invisible pressure suddenly suddenly release the feeling really a little bit not suited.

Feeling a long time, I returned to the car and found that time was over two hours. not the time of the phone have been slow.

Then I sat in the car, I feel particularly quiet, had wanted to open the radio to listen to songs. But suddenly found the radio seems to be a modern technology. I suddenly found is not driving is not allowed. That my plan is not a failure. I feel very disappointed. So I drove home. Home I see my phone or on my desk, suddenly want to take up to take a look, I am not sure what the news is waiting for me, but I just want to see the dark screen hidden what. No, there are more than 1 hour I can succeed. So I went to my roommate room, he was watching the video, I began to chat with him. We talked a lot about the past, from our first impression of the United States, to the Thanksgiving Day plan and so on. Suddenly found that the exchange between people really is a very interesting thing.

I asked my roommate time, just 4 hours, I returned to the room to pick up the phone. I looked at the phone while the information recalled today's harvest. I think, or mobile phone fun. .