This assignment is broken into two parts.  The first part is "Looking on From a Distance".  Attached you will find the Narrative Essay that must be reviewed and find a few things I could have done better.  In at least 150 words discus those changes from the narrative essay.

 

The second part is "Revision Plan".  Attached you will also find the Persuasive Rough Draft that must be reviewed and write down plans for revising it on how could I have made the argument stronger, more relatable to the audience, and so on.  What will you change and how will those changes benefit the reception of your work.  This assignment should be a minimum of 150 words about how I plan to revise my Persuasive Rough Draft.

 

In order to complete this assignment both attached essays must be read.  Also please provide your original work and do not plagiarize.  If you are found plagiarizing you will be reported. 

 

Looking on From a Distance

Sometimes is it easy to forget about the importance of revision, especially when you're writing to the deadline. For our discussion this week, we read Rachel Toor's essay, "Not My Type." Toor doesn't really get into the idea of allowing for time and space between drafts, but she does discuss how much better her work is when she can approach it as an outsider (Toor, 2012). Take a look at the Narrative essay you submitted in week four. Read through it and find a few things you could have done better. In at least 150 words, discuss those changes. While you can mention it, try to look deeper than any formatting or grammar issues you may have had. Look at the way you organized your essay, how you tied everything together, even at your word choice. Could you have benefitted from writing your essay in multiple drafts? 

 

 

Revision Plan

Now that you've had the chance to reexamine your Narrative essay, take a deeper look at your Persuasive rough draft in the same way. Think about how you could have made your argument stronger, more relatable to your audience, and so on. Write down your plans for revising your Persuasive essay for next week. What will you change, and how will those changes benefit the reception of your work? You should write a minimum of 150 words about how you plan to revise. 

 

 

*Note that your writing will be relatively informal this week, but do make the attempt to keep it as clean as possible. After all, we are talking about revision this week . . . .

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