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Google Play Movies

 

a.        Authentication System

·         Entry Screen

Good.

The main screen displays most of the popular content by different group. The categorize is easy to organized.

 

 

·         Login/ Sign In (Go and discuss the whole flow about the login system)

Good.

After you enter to daydream app, it will ask you to tap your email and password for daydream. So, when you enter to Google Play Movies, youdon’t have to sign in.

 

Google Play Movies Sign In flow:

Sign In -> Enter your email and password -> Sign in button

 

 

·         VR Keyboard

Good.

Same VR keyboard with YouTube.

The keyboard is well-done, with an excellent UI design. The keyboard has a curve to fit the video screen. It’s also comfortable to read and tap. They put keyboard a little lower than the regular eye level, but you have a nice feeling about this because the keyboard curve is well-fit to the environment. You feel as if you are typing words on a typical keyboard.

 

 

b.        Environments

·         Results

Good.

This is a nice house environment; you can choose your movies in garden and also see the inside house. I don’t have any uncomfortable feeling in this simple cozy environment. “I feel really relax at home.”

 

 

·         Lighting (the lighting from Room and Screen)

Good.

Perfect Lighting from environment and movie screen.

 

·         Options (Environment Setting options)

Ok.

 

c.        Navigation

·         Content Categorization

Good.

Filtering is available in front of you, scrolling left of right to choose movies’ category.

 

·         Menuing

Good.

A very straightforward set of menuing items.

 

 

·         Sub-navigation

Good.

Easy to read and use. 

 

·         Sorting and Filtering

Good.

The filtering is the strongest part for their app. They use the layout.

 

 

d.        Playback Controls

·         Player Overview

Good.

Same Play Overview with YouTube. Excellent UI and easy to use for everyone. They use large size UI and more space to help the user to control the player.

 

·         Fast Forward/ Rewind

Good.

Same Fast Forward with YouTube. They use a nicely-sized UI, and the interaction is good for them. The buttons are on the bottom, as with the regular YouTube video layout, however the buttons are stand out.

 

 

·         Timeline Scrubbing

Ok.

Same Timeline with YouTube. The timeline is too low toward the bottom. If they can raise it up somewhat, that will be great.

 

 

·         Closed Captioning

Poor.

No Closed Captioning.

 

 

e.        Playback Markers

·         Visual Display of Progress

Good.

They designed nice visual display, such as the timeline becamehot pink after you click it, making things much easier for users.The hot pink also their significant color.

 

 

f.         Search

·         Results

Good.

Same search experience with YouTube. They even have voice control, which provides an even more immersive experience in VR, since one does not type to communicate in real life, but uses his or her own voice.

 

 

 

g.        Performance and Stability

·         Speed

Good.

 

·         Crashes or hangs

·         Good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Feedback from Google VR-V1.5

 

The Result:

For the Google VR 1.5, the main force is Environment options and the reminder notification for last watch.

I like the last watch reminder on the top part of the entry screen. It is really easy for the user to notice what was last time they watch. Since we don’t have watch list. This is an understandable idea.

 

 

The environment:

Google VR 1.5 create 3 more environments, including Game of Throne, West World and Sky environment. My favorite one is the west world environment, which have nice 3d models to help users to have realistic feeling. However, I feel the environment is too distractive when user begin to watching the movies. The environment lighting is still here, which is hurting my feelings. For that reason, I more prefer the sky environment with the dark background.

 

 

 

 

Upload New VersionReport:

After the HBO VR released, I checked it in daydream. However, I didn’t know how to upload/ download the new version from the mobile app. If I use the daydream, it would show me the new version. However, the mobile hbo vr app was still old version, which would have two HBO VR Icons showed in daydream menu.

 

 

 

The icon of changing environment.

 

Icon is little hard understanding the meaning of change environment. So, I have an idea about icon design. Put the image icon into the cycle. See design files.

 

Also for the hamburger menu, maybe we should ask the user go back to browser.

1.        I know go back to Brower is not nice experience. However, for our current design. The words too small to read. And current design has a lot content need to be read.

2.        If the future design, we have separate layers and icons, which we can merge it back.

 

 

 

The layout design. 

These sketch files and unity prototypes are only force on layout.

 

Later, I will force on play control.