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Honorable Judge
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2500 Tulare St.
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Fresno, Ca 93721
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February 8, 2017
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Your Honor,
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RE: LENIENCE LETTER
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I am writing this today to request for the leniency of Tremayne Beard who is a friend of
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mine whom I have known for a period of 7+ years within this period I have come to respect him
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a lot.I met Tremayne first during a community event; from that moment, I could tell that he
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was a kind person with an underlying great personality. My other meetings with Tremayne
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were of similar nature, despite his mother been a drug addict and the father been absent, he
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was raised by the grandmother who lived in a gang neighborhood, which made people mistake
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him for been a gang member and he was always defending himself.His kindness can be seen
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when he and other bikers helped fulfill a dying girl last wish of riding with bikers just like she
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had seen in movies. The girl had been diagnosed with cancer and died three months later.
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Tremayne found himself with very little guidance as he grew up since the parents were not
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around and the neighborhood he was brought in was not much of help. He is aware of the pain
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that he caused to everyone and especially his family and he really wishes to make amends for
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his wrong actions. Kindly grant him an opportunity to become a useful member of the society
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again.Any questions please feel free to contact me at (559)321-3216.Thank you for
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considering this leniency request.
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Yours truly,
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Tobie Gray
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687 W. Holland
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Clovis, Ca 93612
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