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You helped me with this paper. Can you make it a paragraph or so longer and separate the paragraphs? This is an actual letter to a judge.
Honorable Judge
2500 Tulare St.
Fresno, Ca 93721
February 8, 2017
Your Honor,
RE: LENIENCE LETTER
I am writing this today to request for the leniency of Tremayne Beard who is a friend of
mine whom I have known for a period of 7+ years within this period I have come to respect him
a lot.I met Tremayne first during a community event; from that moment, I could tell that he
was a kind person with an underlying great personality. My other meetings with Tremayne
were of similar nature, despite his mother been a drug addict and the father been absent, he
was raised by the grandmother who lived in a gang neighborhood, which made people mistake
him for been a gang member and he was always defending himself.His kindness can be seen
when he and other bikers helped fulfill a dying girl last wish of riding with bikers just like she
had seen in movies. The girl had been diagnosed with cancer and died three months later.
Tremayne found himself with very little guidance as he grew up since the parents were not
around and the neighborhood he was brought in was not much of help. He is aware of the pain
that he caused to everyone and especially his family and he really wishes to make amends for
his wrong actions. Kindly grant him an opportunity to become a useful member of the society
again.Any questions please feel free to contact me at (559)321-3216.Thank you for
considering this leniency request.
Yours truly,
Tobie Gray
687 W. Holland
Clovis, Ca 93612
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