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Omar Almuhaidib

Professor Kassie

ESL 042

14 November 2016

My experience with Smoking cigarettes

                Everyone has made a mistake at somepoint in their life that they wish they didn’t do.The outcome of this error hasaffected their life considerably.One of my biggest mistake that I have donewas smoking cigarettes.Ibeginconsuming the poison of tobaccoback when I was in high school;as a way to improve myreputation in school and show that I’m a man. Others smokedcigarettes to showhow cool they are.In a conservative community doing dangerousthing, drifting or smokingcigarettesis a not pleasant way to take a break from the surrounding.Smoking for five years decreased my health causing me a frequent shortness of breath and anodule in mylung.

                Smoking at a youngage impacts the quality of life.I finish almost one pack perday,sometimes two packs a day, it depends on whatis going on throughout the day. Ifjust chilling or playing FIFA game, I would have finish two pack of cigarettes.I have never thought of what tabasco is doing to my bodywhat kind of side effect, or how other feels next to me after smoking.Everywhere I go, I see the warning of Lungcancer,nodule,tumor,caused by tobacco.Moreover, more warning signs for smoking cigarettes in the bottom of the pack. I wish I paid attention to the warning sign before all this happened to me.

     The day that has changed my life, the awakening call impacted my life significantly.I was playing with my friend online, and out of sudden I felt that Ican'tbreathe well, I called my friend to take me to the hospital. While waiting for my friend,  I felt like I was fainting. After tenminutes my friend Mohammedarrived, then he drove me all the way to the emergencyroom. Whenwe arrived, they gave me a shot and ventilation.They let me rest for 1 hour; then they ask few questions.

          Small questions that meant nothing before,but with my health now it's started to be clear  

The first question they ask about, do you smoke? I said yes. Thesecond is for how long.

I told them for almost six years; they said we need to do CT scans to make sure everything alright. I said sure why not,then they sent me to thescanningmachineit was colossal its look like asarcophagus. Then they send me back to my room. I was waiting for the results, to be honest, I was afraid and nervous at the same time. Then after one hour the doctor came into my room to tell me about my health. He said nothing is dangerous,but the CT scan showsthat you have a 22-cmnodule in your right lung. Hesaidit's not common at a young age that a person develops a nodule.Also, the primary role of the existence of the nodule smoking.Smoking more will play a role into converting this noduleinto a cancerous tumor. Since he saidthat, I quit smoking cigarettes.

In,conclusion, smoking cigarettes will impact the quality of life significantly .For example, bad smell no one wants to sit close to you because of cigarettes smell. You will spend so much money on thing that will cause you cancer, instead, save your money on something that you like. I was lucky that I didn't have aserious health problem.Thanks to my God that I quit smoking cigarettes before I get cancer.If I could have just one wish, I would wishthat I haven'tsmoked cigarettes.ever