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I completed a draft proposal. My instructors comments are below as she states that my resources are too old and I need a more clear subject. I am doing my memo on The Army's Database system or Network Security can also be used. This memo is to the position higher up that can allow me to do conduct my study and help make changes where needed. I need some come help on this. Strong writers only and US tutors. Attached is everything you need. If you need to discuss further feel free to contact me here.
This was my instructors critique for my memo I already done
"Thank you for posting Andrew. What exactly is the environment? Be sure to include that in our communications - military is not quite defined. Where - what risk level - what objective etc. so all students understand. It appears youwant to discuss databases - but the source you provide is from 2005 -certainly that ambition has changed in 12 years - here is an interesting article about technology in 2005 - http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2015/05/07/2005-tech...By now I know that you understand how important timely sources are"
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