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Kaplan University
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University of Santo Tomas
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Proofread my essay and fix it according to all the comments given. Add the subheadings before every main point and follow these two rubrics.
Elements
Points
Content
Introduction â ½ page
Includes attention getter
____________/1
Provides appropriate entry to topic
____________/3
States research question(s)/research thesis
____________/1
Body â 8-9 pages
Presents a structured body that includes all fully developed sections of paper
____________/20
Includes headings that reflect paper organization
____________/5
Supports points/arguments with credible source material and cites definitions of key terms/ideas as applicable
____________/20
Synthesizes multiple sources
____________/15
Shows evidence of critical thinking and in-depth analysis
____________/5
Conclusion â ½ page
Restates main points and/or answers research question(s)
____________/5
References â 1 or more pages
Contains all and only cited texts
____________/2
Mechanics
Is accurate in grammar, spelling, punctuation, capitalization, word choice, and use of transitions
____________/10
Citations
Uses correct APA in-text citations
____________/3
Includes correct APA references
____________/2
Format/layout
Follows APA page layout (title page, running head, headings, font)
____________/3
Revision
Incorporates feedback from Working Draft
____________/5
Total
____________/100
Elements
Points
Content
Title Page
Abstract and Key Words
Summarizes research paper in about 150 words
_____/4
Lists 3-5 key words
_____/1
Introduction â up to 1 page
Includes attention getter
_____/1
Provides appropriate entry to the topic
_____/2
States research question(s)/research thesis
_____/2
Body â 9-11 pages
Presents a well-structured and logically argued discussion
_____/15
Includes headings that reflect the paper organization
_____/3
Supports all points/arguments with credible source material and cites definitions of key terms/ideas as applicable
_____/15
Synthesizes multiple sources
_____/7
Shows originality, critical thinking and in-depth analysis
_____/10
Conclusion â up to 1 page
Restates main points and/or answers the research question(s)
_____/3
Comes to logical conclusion from evidence
_____/3
Makes final comment(s)
_____/2
References
Contains all and only the cited texts
_____/2
Style
Entire paper
Is polished in tone and style appropriate for academic writing
_____/5
Mechanics
Entire paper
Is accurate in grammar, spelling, punctuation, capitalization, word choice, and transitions, using variety in sentence structure
_____/10
Citations
Entire paper
Uses correct APA in-text citations
_____/2
Includes correct APA references
_____/3
Format/ Layout
Entire paper
Follows APA page layout (title page, running head, headings, font, etc.)
_____/5
Revision
Incorporates feedback from the First Full Draft
_____/5
Total
_____/100
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