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Miss Kerri Bennett

ENG 1003-001 Comp. I

January 27, 2017

Vanilla ice cream

My grandma always says that people who laugh at their mistakes will always make those around them laughing along. Today I learned the facts in her utterance.

‘Stay in line,’ Mr. Omar shouted. I knew at that moment that my friend Khaled would not be able to cut. I looked at Khaled and frowned. However, the line began to move, and I followed along just hoping that I will get my favorite vanilla ice cream.

When I reached the counter, I looked at the available choices. All I could see was chocolate and strawberry ice creams. I could hear the rumbling of my seemingly disappointed stomach. Then, out of the corner of my eye, I finally saw one last piece of vanilla ice cream. My level of excitement was unbelievable.

‘Vanilla ice cream,’ I said politely. Mr. Omar handed me the ice cream. I took the cone hurriedly that the ice cream fell. My efforts in saving it were futile. I could feel my face turning redder and redder while all I could hear were other kids in the line laughing.

As I looked at my upside down cone I heard Mr. Omar, ‘Shabib, would you like a strawberry ice cream as a replacement?’ I looked and saw Omar laughing too. With a nervous smile, I responded, “Of course.”

Mr. Omar smiled and served me with another cone of strawberry ice cream. I looked around at my friends and laughed again. I quickly grabbed the ice cream and walked away with my friends excitedly.

I have never believed my grandma until I saw my friends sharing laughter with me. The laughing made me feel good rather than disappointed.     

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