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MCS,MBA(IT), Pursuing PHD
Devry University
Sep-2004 - Aug-2010
Assistant Financial Analyst
NatSteel Holdings Pte Ltd
Aug-2007 - Jul-2017
Hi the instruction is to use the essay i wrote *(in attachment) and do a revision following the revision instruction (in attachment).
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The total change should be around 500 words, please make everything you changed in to red color.
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For some personal information i am an international student from China, so please do not use really hard words
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