prompt: Choose a career based on what we have read and what you have researched. In a 3 to 4 page essay, persuade a friend to pursue this career by explaining as much as you can about the career and why they should choose it. Quote at least three sources including videos we have watched, essays we have read and two outside sources.
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I have done the essay, but it is low quality to turn it in and it is not strong persuading essay.
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Things I need you to do for this:
-Check the structure/ grammar of the essay
-Add more explaining to the quotes (connecting them)
-my conclusion and intro need help
-transitioning from one paragraph to another
-making it more into a persuading someone to take the career (Computer Engineer)
-anything that needs help
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And thank you for helping me with my essay
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