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    Oct-2001 - Nov-2016

Category > Management Posted 09 Jan 2018 My Price 2.00

consensus of opinion

Redundancies, Jargon, Slang, Clichés Revise the following sentences to eliminate redundancies, jargon, slang, clichés, and any other wordiness.

 Example Once we collect all the true facts, we are good to go on the government contract.

 Revision Once we collect the facts, we can proceed with the government contract.

1. First and foremost, we plan to emphasize an instructional training program.

 2. There was a consensus of opinion among managers that they had to collect together as much data as possible to pump up profits or face the fact that their bonuses would go down the tubes.

3. If at all possible, Ryan did not intend to repeat again his lengthy presentation that really bombed and lasted until 5 p.m. in the afternoon.

4. Despite the fact that the parking lot is extremely small in size, we are at a loss to explain the reason why management pulled the plug on a plan to enlarge it in size.

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Status NEW Posted 09 Jan 2018 11:01 AM My Price 2.00

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