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6.7 Clichés, Slang, and Wordiness (Obj. 2)
Your Task. Revise the following sentences to avoid confusing slang, clichés, and wordiness.
a.         Although our last presentation bombed, we think that beyond the shadow of a doubt our new presentation will fly.
b.         Our team must be willing to think outside the box in coming up with marketing ideas that pop.
c.          True to form, our competitor has made a snarky claim that we think is way below the belt.
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d.         If you will refer back to the budget, you will see that there are provi- sions that prevent blowing the budget.
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