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MBA, Ph.D in Management
Harvard university
Feb-1997 - Aug-2003
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Strayer University
Jan-2007 - Present
Zachary, there are many problems with your report, primarily in the areas of
documentation and content. You state that Facebook is in decline without supporting that statement. How is it in decline? You provide no statistics or examples to show that this is so. This is symptomatic of the main problem in your report, which is that you make several generalizations (about the decline of Facebook and strategies to help it recover) without providing documented statements or examples to support those generalizations. You do not cite three of the sources listed in your References section, and four sources are cited incorrectly. In addition, there are a number of style and grammar problems. Please see my detailed comments in the report itself (attached). I invite you to revise your report to improve your score for the assignment.
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