professional email

 

Here is a quick list of changes you should consider making:

 

- Shorter subject line... don't use all caps.

 

- Cut down the text in the middle by using section titles and listing information as follows:

 

Date:

Time:

Address:

Parking:

Location:

Technology:

Other:

 

This email should be concise and only include the details the person needs. So, you'll need to cut down on your text and make this visually more easily readable. Also, make sure you do a thorough proofread on this. Phone numbers should use proper dashes, and your signature line should be either Sincerely, or Best regards.

 

Think about it this way. If Neil is reading this on the phone and has just a few minutes to gather what he needs to know, how can you best impart the details.

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