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Category > Art & Design Posted 04 Aug 2017 My Price 10.00

I need a strong body paragraph to go along with my working thesis in the next hour or two.

HELP!!!!  I need a strong body paragraph to go along with my working thesis in the next hour or two. 

Working Thesis:  Even though showing fear will only reveal vulnerability to both the enemy and sometimes cruel fellow soldiers, the burden of all the items that each soldier carries as they struggle through the war are both physical and emotional

The story and annotated bibliography attached just in case it is needed. Instructions are as follows:

The paragraph should include at least three examples of paraphrases and/or quotations (there should be at least one of each) with correct citations in APA format. After the body paragraph, be sure to include reference page citations for the paraphrased and cited sources. Then, answer the following three questions:

  • 1.Explain the connection between the topic sentence and your working thesis. Would this connection be clear to someone without your explanation? If so, why? If not, how can you modify your topic sentence and/or thesis statement to make this connection more clear?
  • 2.Explain the choice of reference material. How do the references support the topic sentence? Would this connection be clear to someone without your explanation? If so, why? If not, what information should you add to the paragraph to make this connection more clear?
  • 3.Does the paragraph contain any unnecessary information? Does everything in it work to support the topic sentence? What information could be added or removed? In essence, you are being asked to evaluate the cohesion of your paragraph.

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Status NEW Posted 04 Aug 2017 07:08 AM My Price 10.00

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