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Category > Art & Design Posted 08 Aug 2017 My Price 10.00

Here are the original instructions. The paper is written, but I received negative feedback.

Here are the original instructions. The paper is written, but I received negative feedback. 

The original instructions are:

write an informative summary of the article “Welcoming a New Generation to College: The Millennial Students,” by Elam, Stratton, and Gibson. This article is included in the “eReserves” section of your LEO classroom.

Your essay should have the following:

an introductory paragraph with a thesis statement. at least one body paragraph a concluding paragraph. 

As Wilhoit explains on page 67, the conclusion will “summarize the source text’s last key assertion, finding, or argument.” You as the writer of the summary should not editorialize or make judgments on the text. Rather, as Wilhoit points out, you should “be neutral and objective” as you summarize the key points.

Length: 500-750 words.

The original article content server is attached; however, I need to revise the summary. I have also attached the summary and the feedback.

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