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Strayer,Devery,Harvard University
Mar-1995 - Mar-2002
Manager Planning
WalMart
Mar-2001 - Feb-2009
Hey, Here my instructor feedback Opportunities for improvement: The Security section needs more work: • the new content does not meet the 3-page minimum length requirement; • identification of the primary security risks (loss, theft, damage, or destruction of an asset); • identification of the primary security threats (Interception, Interruption, Modification, Fabrication); • determine the order in which threats should be addressed; • prepare an action plan to reduce the threat from each risk listed in priority order. Rough Draft Review needs more work: incorporation of feedback; • System Requirements section (see IP-1 feedback); • Resources section (see IP-3 feedback); • Timeline section (see IP-3 feedback);  Security section; • References section. Recommended revisions have not been incorporated. Please review comments I made about IP3. Document organization/format errors: • section headers (level 1 format) for ALL sections should start on a separate page and conform exactly to the names in the IP1 task list; • first line of paragraphs should be indented. APA errors: • reference(s) are listed but not cited; • reference format does not conform to guidelines; • basic reference format is author(s), (date published or n.d.). Title. Retrieved from URL (Retrieved from only when appropriate).
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